Wednesday 28 March 2018

Hermit Poem




Hermits
The itch from my unshaved beard
 As I read my book in boredom
    sand pouring down as hours go by
    wind howls and the chill creeps through
Deep, deep in the dark dark cave lurks a hermit
Limited accessories he sits and waits  

He hides away in his shell and eats of what he has   

2 comments:

  1. Hi Grace,
    I am a student that attends Panmure Bridge School. I think your work on hermeit was great. I think you should add in a blurb to explain waht you have learned from this peom. Did you create the picture ?. Great job Grace. Keep it up!

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  2. Greetings Grace,
    What an outstanding blog post from you. I like the way you've added a piece of art to make your blog post look great.The poem you wrote sounds really interesting.Next time you should probably add a blurb, but everything else looks great to me. Did you create this piece of art?
    Nice Work.

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