Kia ora Grace, it is Clem here. I liked how you liked crayfish and paua, it reminds me of Bruce Bay. Also I liked how you put Aotearoa instead of New Zealand you put the maori word. Next time on slide 3 you could make you writing a better font.
Hi Grace, you have done a great job on why the ocean is important. I really love the pictures you put in with your writing. I agree there is a real problem with the plastic and fishing nets in the ocean, especially for the whales and dolphins. You are lucky you get to see dolphins swimming at Bruce Bay when we are at the batch. I think you will get to swim with dolphins one day when Dad teaches you how to go diving. Love Mum
Kia ora Grace, it is Clem here. I liked how you liked crayfish and paua, it reminds me of Bruce Bay. Also I liked how you put Aotearoa instead of New Zealand you put the maori word. Next time on slide 3 you could make you writing a better font.
ReplyDeleteHi Grace, you have done a great job on why the ocean is important. I really love the pictures you put in with your writing. I agree there is a real problem with the plastic and fishing nets in the ocean, especially for the whales and dolphins. You are lucky you get to see dolphins swimming at Bruce Bay when we are at the batch. I think you will get to swim with dolphins one day when Dad teaches you how to go diving. Love Mum
ReplyDeleteThanks Mum for the thoughtful comment. Do you have anything I should do next time?
ReplyDeleteThanks, from Grace.